tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post2053028820361174372..comments2010-02-16T10:58:57.583-08:00Comments on The Better Half: SWF ISO better half.H2http://www.blogger.com/profile/06082224591159977448noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-39740217765550460292009-01-07T18:17:00.000-08:002009-01-07T18:17:00.000-08:00Very well written! I too love the metaphor you use...Very well written! I too love the metaphor you used. I look forward to reading more. =)Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02369261759095410226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-16924482331897863362009-01-06T07:36:00.000-08:002009-01-06T07:36:00.000-08:00This is very engaging. I loke the metaphor alot. C...This is very engaging. I loke the metaphor alot. Could open up some other possibilities for realted break-up metaphors later on, as they relate to your progress towards your goal. Messy break-up, re-bound relationships....stuff like that.Tulaloohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17792606058606097870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-66198371323827356682009-01-04T16:55:00.000-08:002009-01-04T16:55:00.000-08:00I am looking forward to the blogs to come and the ...I am looking forward to the blogs to come and the ending I am sure will be forever life-changing! Great work!M2s108https://www.blogger.com/profile/06675365836977577507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-43815385205442258942009-01-04T14:44:00.000-08:002009-01-04T14:44:00.000-08:00I suspect this will be a real page turner. I appla...I suspect this will be a real page turner. I applaud the respect to the new with the identification of the old and useless.Moehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700204183185604239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-7860948557227258182009-01-04T13:03:00.000-08:002009-01-04T13:03:00.000-08:00Agreed very engaging, made me wonder 'what' ties y...Agreed very engaging, made me wonder 'what' ties you to your former self that you are leaving behind. And to be honest, we all have someone just like that inside of us. We may not use food as a drug, but do just the opposite - avoid food as your choice of drug. I can't wait to read more and to support you on this journey!Sarah Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06012002092445004118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-2782328930421295012009-01-04T12:39:00.000-08:002009-01-04T12:39:00.000-08:00Hooray for new beginnings! I enjoyed the metaphor ...Hooray for new beginnings! I enjoyed the metaphor of breaking up and searching for a new. Your writing style is very engaging.DELhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05444889839392657891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-68413356505115570262009-01-04T12:26:00.000-08:002009-01-04T12:26:00.000-08:00Stand by for some (very good) suggested editing th...Stand by for some (very good) suggested editing this evening. :-)<BR/><BR/>~HH2https://www.blogger.com/profile/06082224591159977448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4619000441548541501.post-7494692340603849212009-01-04T12:07:00.000-08:002009-01-04T12:07:00.000-08:00I like how you use the metaphor of "breaking up" i...I like how you use the metaphor of "breaking up" in comparing your life change through diet and exercise. You've brought a component of emotion and provoking thoughts that are more engaging than simply saying: this is my new goal. <BR/><BR/>Very good!Bobbinogginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04112872337429003897noreply@blogger.com